Painting Tomorrow

Passion flows smoothly,
colors of dreams yet to bloom,
chosen by the heart
In truth, we are all painters,
defying the emptiness.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft