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Jan 25, 2011
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Just One Child.
Maybe, just one child is all it would take
born into this world of conflict and hate.
To grow up with a voice all men would hear
who would speak of peace, not war and fear.
Someone who would bring the world peace
and encourage all wars and cruelty to cease.
A man, or woman, the world would listen to
I’m just a man with a simple point of view.
But could it be, it’s already happened before
and no one will listen to anyone anymore.
Perhaps we just need it all to happen again
but would we just listen and carry on the same.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Timbo
14 years 5 months ago
Thank you Shirl, you always
Thank you Shirl, you always make me feel like I can actually write reasonable poetry!
thanks again and take care,
Tim
Timbo
14 years 5 months ago
thanks for the comment Lonnie
thanks for the comment Lonnie.
Tim