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Mar 31, 2016
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till one can.....hold on as long.
hold on as long.
I assure you there is nothing beyond
we all love those who to us here belong
then all go up to
the pyre cemetery incinerator
and say
SO LONG ......
well since he is gone
why even go to the
Rideliew
'tis so far
most say so
no one will know
fare well for long
so on the Earth
only stay
here alone we all belong
come along
we all will sing a merry song
hahahahha....peeee pong
to worldly happiness we all
belong
so keep the fight on
we and all Neo
will stay
till one is finally gone
So stay on!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
9 years 3 months ago
well done...poignant joe
well done...poignant
joe
lovedly
9 years 3 months ago
I told you Joe
you still have a long time to go
you are still young
and
your poetry has now sprung
see you typed it
once again
without help from
Richards