Geremia

Apr 15, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

NOTHING LOST

There is fire in my heart
that carries me to places
of my own creation,
words flying on Fury’s Wings
bursting from dying spaces.
the soul speaks and I listen
before there is only silence
of the passing spirit; there is
much to tell for the mystery
we seek is within us…

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Richard for Joe. Joe is not doing well and sends his love to all.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

lovedly

9 years 3 months ago

give him our love

on behalf of all neo

an active mind
is need of the hour
enjoy a sun shower

raj

9 years 3 months ago

Richard you are doing a great

Richard you are doing a great deed by writing for our beloved Joe...

Please let him know that all his beloved friends here on Neopoet wish good for him and sendinng our positive energies to him..

Warm regards,

lovedly

9 years 3 months ago

I too endorse

Raj's good wishes from all

lovedly

9 years 3 months ago

I too endorse

Raj's good wishes from all

Keith Logan

9 years 3 months ago

The poem

I know nothing of those things referred to by the above respondents so can only speak of the poem as I read it. The meaning is deep, the execution effective, so all in all, a good poem with the subject well communicated.

Geremia

9 years 3 months ago

Hello, Keith. My neighbor and

Hello, Keith. My neighbor and good friend, Richard oftrn types my porms as I dictate. I have aadvanced Parkinon's disease and have reched my final days, Paralysiss and losss of motor control.
joe

Keith Logan

9 years 3 months ago

Hello Joe

I am deeply sorry for the misfortune visited upon you. You are still a great poet but knowing what you have just said adds many dimensions to what you have written.

lovedly

9 years 3 months ago

you still smile

smiles only but not like me

This smile took many hearts away
only in one now it stays today
each and every night all say
but many a times
he looks another way
to compare your smile
with someone else's all say

but there lies no truth in that
your smile is aging maybe
but still spills youth
on many daily

your smile can be compared
with by mine only
come smile at me will ye surely
a poets smile lasts a lifetime
your will also
along with mine
maybe longer if wishes divine!
with me then twill still be fine...