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Geremia
Geremia
Apr 28, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

FIRE

FIRE

I am shattered and broken
beyond endurance
yet I feel the fire of life
still burning.
I am electricity; electric blue,
the elemental life force
and the essence of Self
that binds me to Creation.
I am the way of all humanity:
the Soul in a covenant of one,
one among all, all into one.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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alidzain

alidzain

9 years 2 months ago

Joe

Now that's a real dose of positive energy in the poem, bro. Good one.

Alid

Esker

Esker

9 years 2 months ago

I like this....

Reminds me of my interests in Tesla and Fermi...
St Elmos Fire of the aviator and the shipcrew...
touring about today....I think of Chuck Berry..
riding along in my automobile...
no particular place to go...
and yet..

I am the go
the place..

and reading here in the busy library
the air exchanger humming..
work was good...the boss
and I always connecting
that creative fire

I am just a day cleaner but a
part of the family there..
some few hours...

Thank U for this elaborate
and lively poem Geremia!

Mr Esker!

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

my mind is now being eroded

my mind is now being eroded

as they pull at my teeth
like a guy pulls a gal's hair
she yells
but smiles
pain O hell
your pull does tell
your love is strewn

so does my dentist lady smile at me
phew such bad teeth have you
still I shall straighten some too

Old man on the path to his final home
the cave
I won't say
grave....
she smiles..
and
pricks into the roots deep
I yell and nearly weep!

Joe your poetry still inspires me

mand

mand

9 years 1 month ago

Hi Joe

Powerful fight back. Inspiring!

Great write - :)

LOve Mand xxxx