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May 03, 2016
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DANCING
DANCING
Every movement I make
Is a dance in slow motion,
a poetry of the body in distress
each thrust into the void suggests
a primal grace beyond rigidity,
and the sublimity of the spirit
defying constriction of space.
it is who we are we Warriors
of the human race.
Richard for Joe
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
9 years 1 month ago
Hi Joe
There are wars fought in places other than battle fields. Where they are fought matters not. What matters is that we Do fight rather than surrender.......stan
Geremia
9 years 1 month ago
well said, stan.
well said, stan.
lovedly
9 years 1 month ago
we fight to sustain
as long as Richards
with us does remain
and
we all are enjoying your fights
ah 'tis poetry
in gods domain
urs on the earth for ever shall remain
Joe