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BLACK WIDOW

BLACK WIDOW
1946

A large black-rimmed hat and
black silk veil covered her face
of ruby red lips and piercing dark eyes,
and a smile that betrayed her lies
she walked across the grass
in mourning black, in a sensual dance
swaying hips in motions slow.
she was a friend to many men,
and married some who never did see
more than one rising sun.

— Geremia, May 04, 2016

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lovedly

lovedly

10 years 1 month ago

U GO back to 1946

were u born then in 1941
i wonder Joe
do let me know
I will guide what next to sow
YOUR NERVOUS SYSTEM WILL
grow

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 1 month ago

good Joe

If you can let me also
your time of birth know
then see what i say
believe it or not
its upto ye
friendly Joe
19th are born leaders
and ur a Libra also
world renowned Joe

was It
SUNDAY/ MONDAY NIGHT?

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