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lovedly

Jun 07, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

At times it often happens

when two poets on any site
seemingly serve the masters

one comes across the other
one, comments
the other replies
well master reply as faster
ere the wilderness thinks
you have gone slow
and
the other poet instead of poetry
has gone to mow
Okay, sow
seeds with another

someone who may be faster
so reply as fast as you can
to a lady O man
or to a rascal
Lady if you can

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

jane210660

9 years 1 month ago

Do you know, I was just

Do you know, I was just thinking that.........
but you got there faster :-)
I'm on the computer a lot today, trying to write, emphasis on trying, think I'll give up and make yet another coffee - would you like one or would you prefer a cuppa? Jx

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

I drink only with my eyes

I love all those who offer champagne
but are wise
they say sorry not today
have a soda you may

wise guys
they save
for their rainier days
and say
we shall come over
to your place

alidzain

9 years 1 month ago

yap

still here. I bet there are some of the new members sharing that same thinking too.

Alid

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

yeah I just found a great poetess

new won
but very interesting one

Keith Logan

9 years 1 month ago

Loved

My you are slow, if you had not noticed the gentlewoman before. She has already shared a good many fine poems here.

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

not slow

dumb like a log of wood
damped to be dumped

now I am reading hers
all one by one
thanks sir for reminding me
of my inability

I love folks
who help
like thee

Keith Logan

9 years 1 month ago

Loved

Always at my leasure
‘tis meet to share a treasure,
especially if the measure
is one of greatest pleasure.

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

thanks keith I'll

RE MEM BER

jane210660

9 years 1 month ago

You both just made me smile,

You both just made me smile, what an accolade to live up to, blimey, I daren't have an off day now :-)
Now where did that dratted muse go...............? Jx

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

you needn't have to

those who are the busiest
are the happiest

Keith Logan

9 years 1 month ago

Jane

Now don’t be feeling crapy
nor even very flappy,
your writing's always snappy,
so says the happy chappy.

jane210660

9 years 1 month ago

Lol

Thanks Keith. Jx