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Am I, the only one

Who lifts
not men
but hopes

who travels
not alone
but helps all to cope

who composes
not knowing woman
nor woe

nor recognition?

am I the only one
about on the Internet
read by so many
why? Ask them

Am I the only one

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

weirdelf

weirdelf

9 years 1 month ago

Really, dear Loved, the only one?

Nothing in this qualifies you as the only one. I am sorry if you are feeling lonely.
Are you active on Facebook or any other social media?
If so please help promote Neopoet there, we badly need new members.
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jane210660

jane210660

9 years 1 month ago

Hiya Lovedly

Hiya Lovedly
I like the poem, but can't help wondering if Am I would be better than I am.
It makes it less of a statement and more of a rhetorical question
Just wondering. Jxx

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

yes

you are right shall amend it

judyanne

judyanne

9 years 1 month ago

??

Really loved - this whole poem is waffle *big smile*
you can do better than this egocentric dribble *bigger smile*

How about a title change to fit this condensed version that is minus the me me.....

Who lifts
not men
but hopes

who travels
not alone
but helps all to cope

who composes
not knowing woman
nor woe

nor recognition?

Up to you of course .... all in my opinion only
love judy
xxc

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

Thanks Jess

LIKE FACE BOOK"s
'''LIKES And Loves '''
I endorse both above

I salute Judy Madam
she helps me a lot
shall amend
Jess and Judy
waffle OUT just see

May all you too bless
you of course are
our Guiding light
why for the silly distinction fight
right!

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 1 month ago

Loved

I guess you realise that the above are right, and I think you are much better and long enough in the tooth to know better.
We will wait to read your next piece as all read yours hoping that you will bring once again a great piece of writing to the stream,
Yours as always Ian..

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 1 month ago

my god Ian

you launch me in a
GAS balloon
hope I don't burst
a bit too soon
here It's noon