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Jun 13, 2016
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Ancient Nights
ancient nights,
a lost poem
wandering
long
in communal memory
a silent sigh of deep yearning
moon glow
and murmurs of spring
a lullaby
soothing man and beast
torch and fire tame
dark, and wilds
a festival
for newborn
lamb and child
market place teeming
exotic flavors
and trinkets to tempt
a fair maiden's favor
boisterous tales
boast and bravado
a husky brew enlivens
blustering howls
as the fires fade
along with the night
huddled and happy
dreams take flight
lighting upon
Memory far flung
laying vague
and muted among
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an incessant din
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Comments
Esker
9 years 1 month ago
reverie of summer
blustering howls
favorite line
sounds like kareoke nite
outside my window and
our walkway seating
second floor
Last nite was different
a vibe and female vocalist
playing west coast
nirvana and something
really cool
I greatly appreciate
your style of poetry
an immense pedestrian
birds eye view of the
focus from the street
nothing held back
and a critical share
of the wander
thank U!