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lovedly
lovedly
Jun 22, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

bring a smile for me

Here is a smile
as a beautiful simile.
Life is short and sweet
let's be happy
till we meet

We may not meet
except in dreams
that itself will be a treat
let's each other
with warmth greet

Today has been a sad day
one niece
and
a sis
both had stroke today

God have mercy
we all have to go
all know

but heavens go slow
one by one
would make us happy
God you know
Don’t you
Amen

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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jane210660

jane210660

9 years ago

Such a happy start and then

Such a happy start and then so sad.
I'm really sorry to hear your niece and sister have had a stroke, I will send you a metaphoric smile. Jxx

lovedly

lovedly

9 years ago

you raise my smile for miles

you are the first poet
who gives me poetic vibes
as I smile
all my while
I want to be a poet like ye
poetric lady

now howz this

syllables i eat ..as you love meat ...eat me
I don't count
I only eat
syllables are for kids

read my poetry
no two are alike
strike me out if you like

but continue to follow me
i compose
Shakesperience poetry
do read me

many follow me
I have over 11000 following
you may another one be
just an add on
if you wish lady/lords poet
your upcoming ones

I stand at the end of a
Cliff
awaiting a whiff

A push by the fast breeze
yet winds have no strength
like me
wait and see
I am PoetTree

lovedly

lovedly

9 years ago

and lady that alone is my QUALITY NO QUALIFICATIONS

KEEP AT IT FAITHLY U B

SO FUNNY

THE FALL IS ENJOYED
MOSTLY BY GUYS AT NIGHTS
WHEN THEY EXPERIENCE ONE
WITH SOME ONE
UNKNOWN THEY FALL
SAID FREUD....
Must compose at least
9 poems a day

one good
rest as leaves

as if
for a rose

others will retrieve
also

have a thorn
stand by

loved by
guys

they get a feeling
they can prick
anyone who is stealing
what
their love and anaconda et all
the guys big and small
love it inside
all know
but why so small be tall all
love guys who long are
or who long
even with a small
bar

many out of closets
then come to go

heaven only
secretly knows

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years ago

Loved

You know I read all comments fast but did pick up on
"you are the first poet
who gives me poetic vibes"
Are you suffering from amnesia lol Young Bard we love and support you always and have done for what seems like for ever.
I send healing thoughts to those of yours that are struggling with the physical body and hope their Spirit is able to carry them over these days,
Yours AS ALWAYS Ian .xxx

lovedly

lovedly

9 years ago

high Ian

you are already branded
why do you worry
after all its all poetry
more the merrier
may be
you are number one always for me
your very own named
bardy
you are sweet and LOVELY