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Jul 01, 2016
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hi fi
On top of the world
touching the sky
only birds and rich folks
can fly
and all know why
Poetry’s soul,
must
give life to words....
creating immortality
Deep within!
Poetry once posted
becomes
public property
so do snaps
if you share
so
take care
all poetic friends....
and snapsters
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
9 years ago
snapsters
your unique phrasing
on some of the more out there
lucid poems is interesting
persons outside the box
seem to have that gift
to survive
surmounting much
against odds and current
which change with political
tides and historical
aptitude
socialist regimes and
fascism
the wealthy purchase plots
of immortality
and the writers suffer
their genius
of angles
Thank U!
lovedly
9 years ago
thank you esker
I have been outstanding
outside the BOX
notwithstanding
yet so far
I HAVE SURVIVED
freely
and
have coined many new words
Shakesperiencely
I will be like him
soonly
Keith Logan
9 years ago
Creating immortality
You have an unassailable logic and yet it is all your own.
lovedly
9 years ago
we all are individuals
each one of us
is an entity of one's own
you are no different
Sir KL