Rett

Jan 27, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Jerry, In Memory

You were mean as home made sin
Whipped my ass time and again
Then you'd tell mama a lie

The Aunt Jenny Hammond's place
Tollie's peg leg made my heart race
Jumped out the back door to land on a jar

Split my foot from heel to toe
Dad rendered you a hell of a blow
And I still have the scar

Taught me to swim in the old creek
Threw me in, laughed till you were weak
Back in the woods by the old sand bar

Doing homework late at night
Taught me how to read and write
And if I failed, get back up and try

Showed me pictures in his racy books
Amazed at how a woman looks
How time just seems to fly

It was hard to see you down
Harder yet putting you in the ground
With my heart about to break

I said goodbye, I said so long
Memories of you still running strong
An emptiness I'll never shake

Jerry Earl Wiginton
Laid to rest January 22nd, 2011
Rest in peace bro. I'll miss you.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Normally, I want harsh critique, just too raw at this time for it. Thank you.

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

14 years 5 months ago

This is not,

This is not to critique though i find little wrong with this poem, i just want to pass on my condolences to you and your family. Regards Roscoe..

Kailashana2

14 years 5 months ago

Me too, ((((((Rett))))). ~A

Me too, ((((((Rett))))). My eyes haven't filled with tears for a long time.

themoonman

14 years 5 months ago

Rett ...

I'm very sorry to hear about your brother ... not much
can be said except that we are here for you and your
family.

deepest regards,
Richard

Hooded Stranger

14 years 5 months ago

Rett

Rett,

a wonderful tribute my friend,

pleiades

14 years 5 months ago

i smiled at your memories,

i smiled at your memories,
and my eyes filled as i came to the
last lines

a moving tribute

my sincere condolences for your loss

Blue_Halcyon

14 years 5 months ago

Rett

This absolutely needs no critique to begin with anyhow! The poem made me cry. An excellent tribute to a loved family member.

Geezer

14 years 5 months ago

I can see...

him now. Laughing, and telling you that you shouldn't have tears for him. [Although he would secretly be proud,] to know that you have written a great tribute. My condolences, ~ Gee

Rett

13 years 1 month ago

My thanks to everyone

I haven't been able to revisit this since I posted it. It has taken me time to come to grips with it. I appreciate you all

Ian.T

13 years 1 month ago

This is a lovely piece, and he will love it as you call his name.
It is our way of life now as we reach for the Winter, and the last two years have brought a lot of things home, as we have let go of so many loved ones.
Your Brother "Jerry", my brothers "Gordon" and "Gerald", and our Sister "Edna", and last week we said farewell to our Sister in law, "Iris.".and Brother in laws "Robert" and "Geoff" left last year also
Time moves us through territory that we would rather miss but it is our journey, we are joined by so many things.
I send you the memory of his smile that will bring you a smile from within..
The tears inside will stop, I know, just a question of when..
You take care young Rett, and know that we are here with you,
Yours, Ian..

Rett

13 years 1 month ago

Thanks Iam

My condolences to you and the family members. Yep, as we reach the winter, we start losing those we love and soon will be reunited with them.