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Aug 30, 2016
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time's mirror
There is a time for every thing
Youth for experimenting
Teens for sexing
Mid age for marriage
Old age for carriage
of those who still seem to be
a burden
but cannot be abandoned
Then you take their place
others come to see you face
and
call you all mirrors of time
times you once did trace
they will now pace
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Vivovon
8 years 10 months ago
Maybe
Nice to read, good to read or lovely to read? Maybe all, especially for an old timer who is patiently waiting to see his parents and kin in the other dimension. At all times, there is beauty, which is lovely. This is what your poem says, as per my perception. Hope I am right.
lovedly
8 years 10 months ago
each one is at an age
you is is as per you
lovedly
8 years 10 months ago
thank you Remark
Keep smiling