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lovedly
lovedly
Sep 10, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

O dad where are you..,Now

When dads go away young
they leave behind memories
so fresh
these never ever age
as dad it appears is here still

but who can fight
against an unknown
unseen gods will

We alone have to severe grief
and our left over time kill

I wonder if dad knows or ever will
he must be ether by now
waiting my merger...
O dad
where will we meet
do indicate an RV
and tell me
how I will recognise thee

O heaven believe me
Dad did love me
Only

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Vivovon

8 years 10 months ago

in limbo

My thinking is that we all meet in the carbon and nitrogen cycles. The thought is very materialistic. It does not mean that I do not entertain the thought of a place where I may meet my parents and loved ones. Perhaps, I am in limbo. So bad! No matter what, I do like your poem and your thoughts.
I am still on earth, but I do believe that Dad only loves you.

Thank you for sharing.

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

8 years 10 months ago

I'm glad

you have happy memories. Those are yours forever. I won't comment on people's beliefs but if they give you comfort that is the important thing.

lovedly

lovedly

8 years 10 months ago

good advice

thank you
but tis my mission to share
what I feel
take it or leave
'tis your own individual belief

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 8 months ago

thank you so much Marvel

hope he does
but in actuality all is a finale
unknown mystery
as there s no beyond beyond
we all know it
but regret to add

none accept

Thanks for you lovely comment
it does flare up in one's mind
a reasonable sympathetic solace