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OriginalRhyku

Sep 12, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Hike Coup:

Up the steep incline
Trudging a trail serpentine
View from peak divine

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore, Shakespeare among many more

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V

8 years 10 months ago

Neat

Pretty neat. Yes, I have seen and been through many serpentines.

O

8 years 10 months ago

Hike Coup

Trekking has given a benign connotation to the expression "take a hike". Fresh air, beautiful scenery and a feeling of accomplishment, elation and contemplative contentment - what's not to like.

8 years 10 months ago

Hi there!

Good one!

Alid

O

8 years 10 months ago

Trekking

Through this Rhyku, I have attempted to make a molehill out of a mountain - reducing the long and arduous journey uphill into three short parts. Thanks.