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Sep 12, 2016
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NO ENTRY
The door is locked.
I don't need worthless sorry,
going back and forth,
only to be hurt in a hurry.
If you only look
for the flaws in others,
you forget
you're a human who errs.
Begone from my life,
I don't need the extra stress
to build up.
I need a long, well-deserved rest.
My heart
is your "No Entry Zone".
No more fights,
Goodbye and goodnight!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Vivovon
8 years 10 months ago
sweet dream
Well. Good luck and sweet dream.
alidzain
8 years 10 months ago
Vivovon
Hi there, this is just one of the angry poems I wrote after a fight with someone close. I do that sometimes to let out some steam. I posted it here to see if anyone can help me express it in other words or in more poetic way.
Alid