Satori

Heroin
sex
a cup of tea
that is a satori

About This Poem

Last Few Words: After a night with a beautiful woman

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Australia

Favorite Poets: Tramalchio

Comments

jane210660

8 years 9 months ago

Hi Guy

Hi Guy
Being ever so British, I think I'll settle for the cup of tea! Lol.
Cheers Jx

Sparrow

8 years 9 months ago

Welcome to Neopoet I shall put my pipe down and try to focus, ah! So you are blind to your own self,
Teach you we must!
I don't think I need Heroin to see my inner self, the Buddhist teaching doesn't need it, Satori comes from the Japanese for seeing into ones true nature, I find that all I have to do is sit quietly and look inward (Smiling)
Neat write and you would be good at Haiku's have a go at some of Barbara Writes workshops or on going Poetry.
Take care Yours Ian.

alidzain

8 years 9 months ago

Hi Guy

Welcome to Neopoet. I'm a tea drinker so I can relate to it more than the rest. Keep on writing.

Alid

valene

8 years 9 months ago

Short but I get it

In this brief poem you've chosen words that manage to convey what your 'satori' be. And if it be found with the aid of heroin, etc... then who am i to judge? We all have or own form of 'satori.' Having said that, I enjoyed the read. I like short and 'sweet' and it actually reminds me of something I wrote a while back that I may share with you at some point!