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Oct 06, 2016
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Fo(u)r The Seasons:
Sprouting shoots of Spring
Nature’s bounty emerging
Anew beginning
Summer’s wind flowing
Celestial star’s orb glowing
Flowers are blooming
Drying leaves curling
Fall’s colours encompassing
Autumn abounding
Nipping air chilling
Grounded snow flakes whitening
Winter descending
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Sparrow
8 years 9 months ago
Great collection
Each of these is spot on for Haiku, to put the odd one into Barbara's new write you need the extra two lines of 7 syllables each, and judging from these you should have no problem.
Look forward to more from your keys,
Yours Ian..
OriginalRhyku
8 years 9 months ago
Sparrow
Thank you for your kind review. Having to abide by the Rhyku rules and have each triplet rhyme was an additional challenge to make the poems intelligible as well as interesting.