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Nov 21, 2016
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THE RING
THE RING
I would like a ruby ring
blood red
magical of soul
mirror of my heart
cradled in bright gold
a ring I can hold
without a memory
something new only for me
just for a while until the time
it slips from a ravaged hand
and remembers who I am….
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
8 years 7 months ago
gold and ruby
I get this...I knew so few men who wore
these..
Men of gentle armor
strength
holding their anger and rage
not stirred and fired by the forge
breath of dragons
(My mother was one! but I loved her
and despite the Hate...we loved each
other)
Something for me...
damn right!
something new!
Given me a new intel sweep
radar wavelength
Thank You Joe!
Mr Esker!
lovedly
8 years 7 months ago
they say remove soul
now say only
S O L E
Keith Logan
8 years 7 months ago
A blood red ruby
would be the highest quality of stone. Most are somewhat lighter. There is something hard to pin down in this piece but all in all an excellent read.