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Nov 24, 2016
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Unenendurable
Unendurable pleasure
Indefinitely prolonged
Gilgamesh cup of tea
That's a Satori
Guy
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themoonman
8 years 7 months ago
Hi,
I'd give it a title that helps ...
saying that, I'm not sure
what you are saying. I love
Gilgamesh, unsure what the
reference means ... perhaps an
old, very flavorful cup of tea. It's
something I've done as well (use
nouns or people as descriptors).
Satori ... the nature of nothingness,
would definitely be unendurable.
Richard
Guy Jenkins
8 years 7 months ago
As far as I can remember
As far as I can remember(since the great flood !) Gilgamesh has a cup of tea with a couple beyond Life and Death
cheers, Guy