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Dec 01, 2016
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Winner Time:
The bait is ready
Weather finally steady
Wait over heady
— OriginalRhyku, Dec 01, 2016
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weirdelf
9 years 2 months ago
From the last few reads of yours
it seems to me you need to broaden your poetic horizons.
No need to trap yourself in form.
OriginalRhyku
8 years 12 months ago
Clear horizon
Good advice
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