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Puter
I frequently use the word 'puter as an abbreviation for computer. Tonight someone, hearing it for the first time said they thought I was saying something rude. Which prompted this.
Puter pudenda
pubicly portentous
publicly portraited,
parole violated.
There was a young man whose new 'puter
could not have been any way cuter
but lacking pudenda
or pubic addenda
he just couldn't manage to root her
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I have never before ticked- "Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly) " So I thought I would just for the craic. Say what you fucking like.
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
8 years 6 months ago
Not even going to pull me up
on the highly suspect 'portraited'?