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Dec 30, 2016
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Yonder
Yonder
Leaves fall
Underneath the autumn veil.
Yonder
Rain pitter-patters
Over the sea of rice.
Yonder
Petals drop
Burying the earth.
Yonder
Snow caps
The mountain.
Yonder
I haply think
Of a flowing stream.
Yonder
Perchance I remember
The coolness of my feet
As I wadded in the water.
Such memory
Begets a sigh.
Yonder
I secretly wish
To be back
Where time is constant.
Yonder
I long to be.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Rula
8 years 6 months ago
A very tender piece
I think many can easily relate to it.
I liked the language use and the repeation of the word yonder shows perfectly the longing feeling of the author.
Really enjoyed
A warm welcome to Neopoet.
The Rain Sprite
8 years 6 months ago
Hi!
It's been ages since I last posted a poem here and unfortunately, my old account cannot be restored anymore. Many thanks for the warm welcome and for all ^_^