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Chef Don
By Chef Don, 7 January, 2017

There are so many poets
to deep to tread.
You get into the moment
but then loose the thread

The purpose looses meaning
The meaning has no depth.
Like a needle in a haystack,
you can't find the head.

You go back to the start
like hitting a wall.
You're more lost
the second time through.
You give up on the poem,
that's all you can do.

My message to you.
The deeper you go
Give your poetry motion
so everything flows.

Chef Don

Chef Don

8 years 5 months ago

You just don't see it

Sorry Jess, I can't be any more blunt
If you can't see the meaning
Your not reading my stuff

See my work is more than a poem
It flows like the ocean
but never gets rough
See a poem should have motion
that shouldn't be tough

Chef Don

Chef Don

8 years 5 months ago

It's a blog that rymes

The blog is to state how some poets have no style
and truly make no sense and discourages the
average reader from enjoying their work.
I am new to this site and have found many
poems that need serious help. It's like being lost in
the dark on a windy night and all that I have is a
candle with one match. I guess I have to learn what
a blog is. My thought is a blog sends a message
while promoting my talents as a writer, it's a journal
for the public to view my thoughts and if I want it to
be in a poetic style like my personal journals are
then that's how it will be

Chef Don

Chef Don

8 years 5 months ago

Poetry to Novels

Hi, this is Don and I have been in the culinary field most of my life. In the past few years
I have turned to my writing. I have a series of books coming out and the first one is called
"The Real Deal Is Love" I'll be hoping for you as fellow artist to take a look and give me your feed back.
Donald R. Bosch