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Feb 09, 2017
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SCIENCE- SOUL AND EMOTION
Deep thought and question
shall tackle it later
when emotion washes away
and
blood flows again
Two ways in life
for some
emotional
others
spiritual
All philosophical
Human is a plant
which moves about
tears bring forth in some
emotion
in many just a
wash!
of cleanliness
it's all in one's mind
I have no UNIVERSAL solution
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
8 years 3 months ago
uh oh
"Deep thought and question
shall tackle it later
when emotion washes away"
Wonderful opening lines.
Weirded me out a bit, close to a poem I almost wrote today, but for once in my life didn't have notebook and pen handy.
The last line is terrible. We all think that, and you know better than to use caps. If you can't say it without caps you have to find another way to say it.
In between is a good poem, worth working on.
Go for it, my dear.
lovedly
8 years 3 months ago
shall mentor
when the tide ebbs
and
emotion is totally washed away
shall adhere to your directions sir
today you are w/o pen and paper
and I w/o mind
brain rests
tired day