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Happiness Begins
Happiness begins with blessings from heavens above,
Happiness begins with all that I prayed for,
Happiness begins with what every man dreams of,
My true happiness only begins with your love...
Happiness begins with sacrificing my whole life,
Happiness begins with bidding loneliness goodbye;
Happiness begins with crying all my tears away,
My true happiness only begins with withthe next day...
It's no question true happiness may not sound real,
Something very hard to wait for and keep still,
But you are the one who gave me something to feel,
True happiness began with you as the Lord revealed.
Happiness begins with declaring your arms my home,
Happiness begins with no need in being all alone,
Happiness begins with a companion who believes in us,
My true happiness only begins with earning your trust...
It's no question true happiness may not sound real,
Something very hard to wait for and keep still,
But you are the one who gave me something to feel,
True happiness began with you as the Lord revealed.
Happiness begins with a virtuous woman with grace,
Happiness begins with putting a smile your pretty face,
Happiness begins with finally finding a soulmate like you,
My true happiness only begins with saying I do...
Happiness begins saying I do...
Mmm, love, yes, I do...
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weirdelf
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