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Aaaaaachhhoooe Chorus
Aaaaaachhhoooe Chorus 1962.....201.......
I aaaaaahhhh...chooed
150 times
nonstop that night
My dad
who was perhaps seemingly then alive
he asked me if I was practicing for
an aachhhoing race
I acchoed again
Later till today
they, docs say
ALLERGIC Rhinitis since long
Oh nuts
my nose never bleeds
it only weeps
tears of glory
that's why no one kisses me
that's another miserable
saddened story
Aachhhoee
When I married
I achhhoed at the wedding
yes mine not yours
all laffed
as if 'twere a prank
all aaahchooed along with me
and
a song took birth
want to hear it
Achhhoooooo
That's all 'twas to it
repeated 170 times
now by 300 in a row
ACHHHOOOOOOO!!!!!
here we go...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
8 years 2 months ago
we all over here by now
know each well enough
thanks have already paid my dues
jerry
bells are still ringing
your poetry is exquisite
as white as is
SNOW
but I still prefer snow -balls
all play with kids mostly
come over and see
lovedly
8 years 2 months ago
please do
I still acchhhooooe tooo
allergy and death are
sisters you know..
twins
together they glow and go
acchhhhooooooo....!!!!
lovedly
8 years 2 months ago
hahahahaha
contagious sneeze is rhino serious
rhyni ....tusssss