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Feb 04, 2011
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Roaming Facades
The sky crumbling
Loose strands
Of clouds
Prelude
To roundabouts
Of floodgates.
Gush - gush -
Breakwaters open.
Tides
Tides
Tides.
See the spectator
Rushing through the wind,
Stings
And scars
Under waded footprints.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dennis Go
14 years 4 months ago
Thanks Xena :)
Sorry for my late response though.