Laws of Nature Friend

Neither you nor can I change
All make a coterie of friends,
who read and then the poet thanks
thus
doubling the comments

I now do not lament
40 poems in 42 days
Have been read by 10500 times
So why worry?
Poetry too is a kind of business
No one has any love for you,
As long as for them
To compose you continue.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

scribbler

14 years 5 months ago

laws

I guess we all have favorite poets on site. In 1st stanza one could write:
who read and then the poet thanks
thus
doubling the comments

but that's just an idea ..................scribbler

loved

14 years 5 months ago

thanks a lot

i have or had been dubbed as incorrigible
obstinate
to be abandoned
not prepared to learn

but i admire good help
and i know it
when its genuine
thanks frnd
u scribble well
better than most i read