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Jun 27, 2017
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Rock (Imagery Workshop)
Pale hardness, polished smooth by endless icy river.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Late to the Party, as usual
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
jane210660
8 years ago
Workshop
This is lovely, I can see that smooth shiny river pebble.
Could you edit it and add it to the workshop, so it's saved in the workshop collection. Just scroll down to the bottom of your edit page and select the imagery workshop.
Jx
Race_9togo
8 years ago
Done
and done, thanks Jane
scribbler
8 years ago
Hi
Reminds me of the quartz river stones found in the mountain streams nearby...........stan
Race_9togo
8 years ago
LOL
The Green River, in Kentucky!
wesley snow
8 years ago
quart rubbed smooth.
Now that's imagery. The color, the shapes.
Race_9togo
8 years ago
Thank you Wes,
That's pretty much always how I think when considering imagery - colors and shapes that give an emotional aspect to the words.
Race_9togo
8 years ago
True,
about the title. But is not the title of a poem the precursor to the imagery? Can one be divorced from the other?
You collect stones? So do I...LOL what's wrong with us?
I would like some opinions on this thing with imagery and title.