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Jun 29, 2017
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you said
you said;
don't fall in love
with me.
but for that
it is too late
for i have
fallen
down
down
down
into the deep
ocean of your
blue eyes.
and how your
smile ignites
the fire at
the pit of
my stomach.
giving me
warmth
to stay alive.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
8 years 3 months ago
Awesome
raw feelings simply and beautifully expressed.
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