Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

you said

you said;
don't fall in love
with me.
but for that
it is too late
for i have
fallen
down
down
down
into the deep
ocean of your
blue eyes.
and how your
smile ignites
the fire at
the pit of
my stomach.
giving me
warmth
to stay alive.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

More from this author

Comments

Rula

Rula

8 years 3 months ago

Awesome

raw feelings simply and beautifully expressed.
Welcome to Neopoet.