TEACHER/STUDENT

They stare at him as he stands there
and try absorbing what he might say.
Their questions range 'most everywhere.
so HE becomes the one who learns today.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: "Let he would learn, teach"

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Comments

riotface97

7 years 11 months ago

Really liked how you seemed to say so much with so few words.

read it a few times and that's what stuck out to me. I've no critique to offer as there's a real self-affirming quality to the poem, if that makes any sense at all. I think that only adds to the strength of the piece. A refreshing read, thanks,

Nicholas.

scribbler

7 years 11 months ago

Hello!

Thank you. I try to write something short once in a while because I know some of my stuff if pretty long. Appreciate your dropping by........stan