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Friday daylight beach

Friday daylight beach

Yesterday was Friday
we went to the far off beach
'twas a sunny and bright day
driving was fun all the way

There we saw all in bikinis
all guys almost in nude
brawling tummies
not worried

all were sun bathing
half on their backs
the other half upwards bound
no one was worried
who was looking around

they all know we all have concealed
what we don't else wise have revealed

we all similar desires reveal
come sun bathe with us
please.

Yesterday was Friday
we went to the far off beach
'twas a sunny and bright day
driving was fun all the way

There we saw all in bikinis
all guys almost in nude
brawling tummies
not worried
all were sun bathing
half on their backs
the other half upwards bound
no one was worried
who was looking around
they all know we all have concealed
what we don't else wise revealed

we all similar desires reveal
come sun bathe with us please.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 11 months ago

And I did ...one young sweetheart

took my heart away

glad you also same thing do say

come another beachy

hot and sexy day
one day
if not today some other day
now have ur re-say in your imitable way
SH

S

scribbler

7 years 11 months ago

Ah the beach

All that cleavage, all that tight swim wear. And the women look even better lmao.......stan

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 11 months ago

some were without almost any

you eye cleavage only
they did show all
no imagery was needed

going again next week
are you coming

wow u will be at the beach
okay vow would do
stan for u