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T. Harmonee
T. Harmonee
Aug 02, 2017 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Untitled Haiku

Love is a violin,
The high E grips my heart strings
never to let go.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is one haiku I'm thinking of using to build a book of Haiku.

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Maya Angelou , Lucille Clifton, Gwendolyn Brooks, Lang Leav

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Comments

Eumolpus

Eumolpus

7 years 11 months ago

Poetic moment

Where's haiku is itself a strictly guarded structure by purists , so many syllables to a line and all that, I am personally not impressed with that take. I believe a very short poem which has a certain sense of paradox or abstract between 2 or more images works. I think the images here connect on that universe and makes a poem. It is unique to some of you previous entries in that it is both personal and impersonal at the same time. Your range is expanding and it is a joy to watch!

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Kailashana2

7 years 11 months ago

Me, too.

Me, too.

It's about the heart's strings. Opera and a good haiku does that to me too. Enjoyed the tugging.