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Sep 14, 2017
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All Love is
What is Love
but a deprivation
of adequacy and submission
of sensuality
may be smokes of sexuality
There must be genuineness of affection
love then becomes intimate
from friendship we switch to loved ones
now becomes it
One must dream
of those passed moments
when love was deprived
moment by moment
but then salvaged by some one
from those lonely occasions
of salty utterances
by some one
Then only real love oozes
as an ultimate outcome
Come some one
love every one
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Marvel Godwyn
7 years 10 months ago
When there is a genuiness of
When there is genuiness of affection love becomes intimate, That is all love actually is.A true love is enfolded in an unadulterated affection. You have rightly said it all,Lovedly .A stunning poem I must say and thanks for sharing.
lovedly
7 years 10 months ago
your comments
stun me Marvel
thanks
hope more will enjoy
Marvel Godwyn
7 years 10 months ago
It's my pleasure Lovedly.
It's my pleasure Lovedly.
Chiori
7 years 10 months ago
nice poem
love is not all about sex, but genuineness of Affection.
i really enjoyed the poem
nice one lovedly
lovedly
7 years 10 months ago
thank you new friends
coming from Nigeria
A place from where came
my school girl friend
Simon
7 years 10 months ago
It's impressing and
It's impressing and passionate