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Recycling

The cycle of life.
Every experience helps us grow.
Every growth helps us experience.
The circle of Life.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A poem is worth a thousand pictures.

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore, Shakespeare among many more

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Comments

weirdelf

weirdelf

7 years 6 months ago

A lesser one of yours,

dare I say a bit trite?
But hey, no-one's perfect.

I look forward to your works and won't use the excuse "I wish I had more time", more truthful to say "I will endeavour to make more time" to respond to your works.

O

OriginalRhyku

7 years 6 months ago

Raw Review

Truth be told it's trite
Poetic review is right
True Weirdelf insight