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loved

Feb 10, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Poetic Masturbation

Very beautiful,

But WE MUST
bow down to those schizophrenic.....
what...leaders!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here
Who know no more poetry?
Fucking more or less,
Than you or me,
Yes they are nude and totally hopeless
Of course needless to say style-less

However sarcastically
words soft and serene,
They all say
I can never write poetry
As clean.

But I shall not abandon
And give it another try
I can't say why,
But I shall continue
To fly,
As high
As the embellished sky

Don’t forget
all friends
who I know
to mutually
DO IT
with me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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V

14 years 5 months ago

Sharing one comment

I want to call it Mutual Masturbation. But just sharing the thought that hit me as I read it. I like it and the image you have created with the poem. Now I am thinking Mutually Masturbating Neos. I best stop....

14 years 5 months ago

Thanks a lot

at least we have started it mutually
YOU love it
I LOVE IT TOO,
I shall continue
as long as
youdo too

14 years 5 months ago

Hi Loved

Given the recent blog postings, I appreciate where you're coming from, although I think that perhaps (just PERHAPS!) inviting friends to a mutual masturbation party is just a tad, shall we say, over the top?

Even so, I enjoyed your poem, as I almost always do; you put together words in rather unique ways, and I like it.

But I'm afraid that I won't be taking you up on your invitation!
;)

14 years 5 months ago

Thanks Jim

r u a scorp also ??
so it may appear
rather rare a deer

14 years 5 months ago

thanks

for having at least come by
some day perhaps
u may stay
so never say die!!!!!!

14 years 5 months ago

PLEASE READ THIS FOR THE CONTENT

as contained
in my comment
for all NEOPOETS
THANKS

K

14 years 5 months ago

As far as I know, love doesn

As far as I know, love doesn't create an *us* and *them*. It creates a *we*. So is poetry mutual self-masturbation? I suppose I'll try anything once.

~A

p.s. Mu

14 years 5 months ago

It will be nice if you avoid wasting your precious time

commenting upon my works
grateful thanks

K

14 years 5 months ago

What, is it something I said,

What, is it something I said, or something I didn't say?

Your loss. My gain. Then, I'll leave you to the 10000 who have voracious appetites for lovelyhoney. It won't be the first or the last time a *poet* declares him/herself *untouchable*.

~A