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Psyve
Psyve
Feb 11, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

AT THIS MOMENT (FIVE MINUTES AGO)

AT THIS MOMENT (FIVE MINUTES AGO)

at this moment,
five minutes ago,

there were a number of things
i wanted you to know-

but i thought i’d save them for
later,

and merely send you
three

points of view, I hope you’re
better,

and I sure do hope they make you think of
me.

tell me what you think of
them

tell me what you
do

if your point naught one percent
chance

does come
through

(Interlude)

thinking of you now at
length,

hoping that you’re
free

thank you for yours of the
tenth-

love,
me.

love
me

at this moment,
five minutes ago….

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Asia, India, IND

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen, Bob Dylan, Roger Waters, Jim Croce, Paul Simon (...albeit not necessarily in that order)

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Kailashana2

14 years 5 months ago

I was looking for the

I was looking for the connection to your music, I found none,

I therefore conclude your muse has returned. And now I await your music.

Anna, dancing,......

Psyve

Psyve

14 years 5 months ago

Anna,

This one has not been put to music, but was written a while back.
While you await the music, I still await the muse... :-)

Psyve

Psyve

Psyve

14 years 5 months ago

Rosina,

I'm sorry, I missed responding to this earlier.
First of all, thank you for taking the time to read this and make some sense of it.

This one means exactly what it says... It's just a bit of a 'coded' letter, if you will.

There is a reference to context that is open to interpretation.... and your interpretation is one possibility....

Psyve