Reminiscing You

Your memory is a serenade.
The melody settles
in my heart. Swaying.
Waiting for the next day it touches my soul
Again.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A person’s memory lives on in your heart even after they have disappear from view, no matter how much time passes.

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