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Feb 14, 2011
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"LOVE"
"LOVE"
Margaret Ann Waddicor
9th February 2011.
Oh love and painfulness,
its blows
take tolls of spells
and wedding bells to boot,
they hoot their sounds
through all our lives,
their music, sighs and groans,
as trials accost our thoughts and lives,
and we decide to roam the skies,
for answers to the tests,
as if they were the pests
that drive us mad,
and yet they are the stories that are sad,
romantic, beautiful and glad.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Glad Valentine's day to you all with my love. Liked playing with sounds/rhythm here too! Ann.
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Nordic cloud
14 years 5 months ago
A blooming romantic, but then..
There's a slight hesitation created in the rhythm here by the and,
I am not sure yet whether I shall change it,
perhaps others can give their opinions.
The rhythm is almost the most important
along with the sound of this little snippet, I feel.
A blooming romantic, but then I was brought up when that was
the dripping-grotto of poetry n'est pas Jayne?
LuvAnn with kisses.