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Feb 16, 2018
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Fraud Cum Laude
Conspiring in bank
Friends in High Places to thank
Fleeing as stock sank
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A 1.7 billion dollars fraud at one of the largest banks and all the conspirators conveniently left the country before the authorities initiated an inquiry.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
weirdelf
7 years 2 months ago
Poor banks are too frail
can not be allowed to fail
better off in jail.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 2 months ago
Great Rhyku response
Only the second line should consist of 7 syllables instead of four. Pithy repartee nonetheless.
weirdelf
7 years 2 months ago
fixed?
fixed?
OriginalRhyku
7 years 2 months ago
Weirdelf
Yes