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Nov 08, 2010
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you’re driving me crazy
whilst walking down some
street one day
a fellow came up to me -- began
a conversation
of many things we spoke
of life in general --
and life in specific --
he looked at me after a time
with
an odd view askance
I was crazy -- he told me
I was driving him crazy -- he said
I winked one wink
and rejoined, "I needn't drive you
crazy, my good sir, you're
within walking distance
of that particular destination."
I walked on down the road.
— Victorclaude, Nov 08, 2010
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Style/Type: Free verse
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Victorclaude
15 years 7 months ago
Pue si!
Pue si!
como labria?
Ciao,
Victor
Ian.T
11 years 5 months ago
Victor
This needs a good edit to bring it to others liking.
The piece seems to be disjointed and jumpy just needs an edit to iron out the lumps,
Yours Ian.T
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