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Nov 08, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

As Age Catches Up!

As We Age!

As age catches up,

I am now getting a feeling

We must write shorter poems

I won't say crisp,

Lest it once again causes,
A slip

And
In the minds of the elite

It gives them a chance
To lisp

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

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Country/Region: ROU

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14 years 8 months ago

the longest one ever

incidentally
i wrote one unknowingly

THE RELIGIOSITY OF RELIGION

ITS TOTALLY DIFFERENT
ur comments
my only isolated friend
over this neopoets new band

lets go hand in hand
loved

14 years 5 months ago

AGE HAS CAUGHT UP

AGE HAS CAUGHT UP

As age catches up,

I am now getting a feeling

We must write shorter poems

I won't say crisp,

Lest it once again causes,
A slip

And
In the minds of the elite

It gives them a chance
To lisp

S

14 years 5 months ago

age

I guess I need to write an epic so when age catches up and shortens my poems they won't all be Haiku lol...........scribbler

14 years 5 months ago

I am almost

HAIKUED
AND where have u been
not seen
no comments
missed uuuuu
hope u
had a good holiday
toooooooooooooo