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raj
Apr 24, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Spirit of Butterfly [Sunku]

Carefree
I flutter
tirelessly

taking
utmost joy
in living life

longing
to embrace
tranquility

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Hi Mark

Thanks for the read and your appreciative comment. This was actually inspired by one of the recent poems submitted to stream by IRiz.

Warmly...

Rula

Rula

7 years 2 months ago

Don't we

all wish to have such a spirit!
Wonderful raj!!

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Thanks Rula

for your read and appreciative comment. It is a poem inspired by another poem posted on stream. I wrote this not to fish for compliments but for satisfying my muse. Good appreciative comments from you and Mark shall keep me inspired and also to keep my interest in writing Sunkus alive.

Thanks again friend...

Geezer

Geezer

7 years 2 months ago

Nice job on...

the Sunku! It still surprises me when I see the little red squiggly line beneath the word Sunku!
I have been so indoctrinated in the form, that I forget that it is not yet a recognized form! You have done a fine job here!
~ Geezer,
,

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Thanks Geezer

for the read and good words. Like you I too feel bad to see the wiggly red underline below Sunku since this form is yet to be accredited in the annals of poetry wh9ich would lead to its acceptance in Dictionary and I believe in the drop down Menu under Form in Neopoet..
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