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Feb 18, 2011
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Deprivation
Deprivation
Deprivation
Is the sperm,
For poetic emotional creation,
Without which there can be
No procreation.
Two are needed,
One a sperm
Another
An ovum
And
In creativity your are
The natural sperm
And
Mind, is your ovum
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
loved
14 years 4 months ago
Thanks Ian
This poem was my comment
On someone’s poem
On another site
And I don't read weird what...not
And others who don’t read me
Ur the best friend
I have and Shirley
Poetry is our forte
Combinedly
Hopefully
loved
14 years 4 months ago
thank u very much
This poem was my comment
On someone’s poem
On another site
And I don't read weird what...not
And others who don’t read me
Ur the best friend
I have and Shirley
Poetry is our forte
Combinedly
Hopefully
Frederick Kesner
14 years 4 months ago
I always thought
that my mind was "me" or the extension of my inmost being.
Your proposition has me rethinking that. :-))