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Ice Dream

I scream
You scream
We all scream

It is like something out of
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory

The dark side
Of sweets

The ice cream man
In a vampire costume

Daiquiris and diabetes

Children trampling each other
For Choco Tacos

Suburban whispering
“What’s the scoop?”
“Did you hear about the split?”

Can there be too much
Of a good thing?
Your tongue turning
Permanent colors?
Maybe, a killer brain freeze?

Do ice cream truck jingles
Ever warp
In your nightmares, too?

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

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fink555

fink555

7 years 1 month ago

Has

a macabre flavor to it, wow. Reminds me of the film "Phantasm".

brittle light

brittle light

7 years 1 month ago

witty and clever, also well

witty and clever, also well composed
that's plenty enough flavor for me to say
I like it almost as much mocha chocolate chip

an enjoyable delight