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Jul 14, 2018
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Senryu # 1
flint stone sparks a fire
alabaster form sculptures
I check my wish list -
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
7 years ago
Absolutely
Awesome.
I espicially like the last line, though each line is a gem of its own.
raj
7 years ago
thanks Rula for the read and
thanks Rula for the read and inspiring comment. You got it spot on..the third line holds a lot of abstract..
good to see you back after a recess of few days..now waiting for you to post your piece..have you read the Blog of IRiz?
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