A star is born Senyru

A new star was born
Traveled through the birth canal
Nova Skye arrived

Last Few Words: Congrats my sixth grandchild is born 8 lbs 13 ounces Shortly after nine am

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

6 years 11 months ago

Barbara very nice Senryu...the line "travelled through the birth canal" captured my attention...

suggestion: would "arrived" be a good replacement to "is here"

Congratulation to the grandma and parents of the newborn

Wishing Nova Skye the very best in life..
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6 years 11 months ago

She a blessing and arrived does sound better