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Aug 29, 2018
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Night
The night is dark and full of Terrors
Spreads the mischief of darkness
You that harbour evil and cast
Away light even with it's regal position
Even The Shadow's are frightened!
Night
Evil you hold dear
You pushed The Stars far away
And evil deeds you embrace!
Your presence be felt everywhere.
Night,night
Reveal yourself and let
Light take darkness as it's protege.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Shadowdancer3349
6 years 10 months ago
Kent
Such a dark serious poem the word mischief seems to light and airy for the rest of the work which I found that you brought your point across very well with your words